Run, Run to the old amusement park sally, when you enter play and play. Ride all around but not the round one. One ride that's all she chimed. And around she went 12 times. One more ride, one more ride she said. Now sally's new home goes round and round, hungry for another.
it’s nice well done
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Thanks Sylvain 🙂 , will check it out.
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Oh, this is fabulous! I love how it sounds like an old children’s rhyme. Such wonderful writing in this piece, and it’s rather haunting there at the end! Excellent piece!!
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Thanks Tony 🙂 , a horror infused nursery rhyme was what i aimed for 😀
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Well done! Terrific image and prose, Ruby.
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Thanks so much Jane 🙂
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