“What a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive.”
That’s what on the weathered concrete plaque in front of Col. Steele’s statue. His memorable words, leading the military coup to victory in 1805. The start of an era of accountability in government, sown with seeds of lies. Standing for truth, while hiding the white tangles of deception.
The memorial’s young guide ushering the group unto the next artefact noticed me mumbling to the stature. At the next point he doubled back to stand right by me.
‘Hello, Aby?
My shocked look gets a response. Pointing to my shirt tag “It says Abigail, its a nice name”. Shifting his darkening gaze upward to the mounted statue. “What he did made us better, in so many ways but why so many lies. Destroying to rebuild from ashes. He destroyed his family. My Family. Tearing apart with his words as easily as he blinded his nation with crimson salvation.”
My mouth agape for lack of words as he left my side to shepherd the tourists round what i now know to be his grandfather’s memorial.
Inspired by Mondays Finish The Story: 1st June
What a story! Well done! Thank you for writing for the MFtS challenge. I hope that you return for the next one. Be well… ^..^
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I’m not able to read your story. It is black font on black background.
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Corrected. Sorry it seemed grey on my screen when I published the post.
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Thank you! I’ll go back and read it now.
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Very interesting… how lies can both destroy and provide salvation at the same time. Well done.
BTW… I, too, couldn’t read the story without highlighting it. Perhaps you could fix that?
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Thank you.
Post corrected.
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Great story! I too would be shocked to be given a tour by the grandson of the man in the statue. Sad that his lies destroyed his family.
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😀 , Thanks Joy.
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Great story.. I love historical related tales… the sadness of this one was brilliantly done!
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Thank you Loricarlson66 🙂 . I’m a big fan of historicals which has influenced my writing.
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I could tell! I look forward to more of your writings 🙂 and please, just call me Lori 🙂
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🙂
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That was such a powerful piece in so few words- well done Ruby!
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Thanks alot Az 🙂
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